Comments on: First attempt at a lead http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/ A place to learn, Naymik style Sat, 03 Apr 2010 22:07:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Mr. Naymik http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-588 Mr. Naymik Mon, 01 Mar 2010 15:53:30 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-588 This is just a test of the reply. Good lead. This is just a test of the reply. Good lead.

]]> By: coraf1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-581 coraf1 Thu, 19 Nov 2009 13:41:56 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-581 Cora, Today this morning 2 airline pilots where found dead due to a blinding rainstorm, that lead the plane to crash into Green Mountain. Police removed bodies early this morning. Cora,

Today this morning 2 airline pilots where found dead due to a blinding rainstorm, that lead the plane to crash into Green Mountain. Police removed bodies early this morning.

]]> By: coraf1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-580 coraf1 Thu, 19 Nov 2009 13:34:31 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-580 Cora Horizon Science Academy is making eduaction better by buying computers for the children for by making them excel by helping them with their credits. The system cost $1.2 million, Mr.Karatas(director said, "class will be available this summer".) Cora
Horizon Science Academy is making eduaction better by buying computers for the children for by making them excel by helping them with their credits. The system cost $1.2 million, Mr.Karatas(director said, “class will be available this summer”.)

]]> By: breannav1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-578 breannav1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:27:54 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-578 Mr. and Mrs. Crobert Dulles return to their homes, on Thrusday night, in it was in flames. The firefighters say that it was due to electrical wiring. They also found out that, Their dog Spottie was killed. Mr. and Mrs. Crobert Dulles return to their homes, on Thrusday night, in it was in flames. The firefighters say that it was due to electrical wiring. They also found out that, Their dog Spottie was killed.

]]> By: leonnac1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-577 leonnac1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:27:21 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-577 Student Counil president and other caught cheating on a test to make money. Student Counil president and other caught cheating on a test to make money.

]]> By: yolondac1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-576 yolondac1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:26:39 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-576 A blinding rainstorm caused a plane to crash in Green Mountain, A.D. Brown and Walter R. Smith of Lakewood .California were found dead in the wreckage. A blinding rainstorm caused a plane to crash in Green Mountain, A.D. Brown and Walter R. Smith of Lakewood .California were found dead in the wreckage.

]]> By: leonnac1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-575 leonnac1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:26:10 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-575 The school is purchasing a new on-line learning system. The school is purchasing a new on-line learning system.

]]> By: breannav1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-574 breannav1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:24:49 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-574 Mr.Karatas wants students, from Horizon Science Academy to earn up their, credict over the Internet. This will happen over the summer so students can get credicts. This will costs up to 1.2 million ,including new computers. Mr.Karatas wants students, from Horizon Science Academy to earn up their, credict over the Internet. This will happen over the summer so students can get credicts. This will costs up to 1.2 million ,including new computers.

]]> By: yolondac1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-573 yolondac1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:23:36 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-573 School over the summer ? Yes says Mr.Karatas ,director of a that lets students make up credits over the summer .They do this with a new online learning system. School over the summer ? Yes says Mr.Karatas ,director of a that lets students make up credits over the summer .They do this with a new online learning system.

]]> By: seamusc1 http://www.naymik.com/learn/journalism/first-attempt-at-a-lead/#comment-572 seamusc1 Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:18:54 +0000 http://www.naymik.com/learn/?p=2348#comment-572 A.D. Brown and Walter R. Smith were found dead today, following a plane crash in Green Mountain on Friday night. The crash was caused by a blinding rainstorm. A.D. Brown and Walter R. Smith were found dead today, following a plane crash in Green Mountain on Friday night. The crash was caused by a blinding rainstorm.

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